福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Our Monitor I am Linyu.I am a chinese student.I am twelve years old. I have a Monitor.She is tall and she is fourteen years old.Her name is Nacy,she comes from England.She has blond long hair .today,she is in a yellow dress and purple cap.We don not look the same,but we are good frients!