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Hellow,everyone.My name is Lucy.And my last name is King.I love China very mach.I want a pen pal to me.I from the UK.And i language is English.I like play sports,so i usually play basketbll after schllo.I like music very much,i always sing or dance,and i love see movies,too.Can i drem come true?