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the benefits of volunteering volunteering work is very important for us in building harmonious and stable society,it encourage people to devote ourself to those in need. Firstly,voluteering work can promote the relationship among people,now people seem strangers even if they are neighbours,but volunteering work like warm sunshine cover people,it make people feel happy and being respect. Secondly,volunteering work is vital for those who had bad experiences,such as going through earthquake and losing families,possibly their house had been destroyed by the earthquake,they became orphans,at this time,voluteering work play an important role to impove those children situation,volunteers can donate money to build schools and hospitals,even pay tution for children.volunteering work change and improve orphans lives. Thirdly,volunteering work spread a kind of belief who are willing to help those in need and don't care rewards,it can widely affect many people who only pursue benefits for themself and is good to promote the development of spiritual civilization. So the government should encourage volunteer working,people,whatever the rich or the poor,should be willing to be volunteers to help those in need.
