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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，但文中拼写错误较多。
Nowadays people tend to encourage children a awareness of competition while others agure that children should be living in a co-operating amostphere. Some educationtists think that children can get a better furture when growing up in a competition amostphere. Firstly, competition make children more effecitive to study. Children tend to learn more skill which is benefical in the furture. It is also help children to slove problem by themselves. On the other hand, some experts would argue that living in a co-operate environment are vital for the children to understand the world. Children who are taught to solve problem with other coupertant are sentitive to understand the feeling of other people. It is benefical for children to deal with the issue of relationship. It is also make children more confident and more intellegent in terms of live. Humanity is a relationship species. People need to intect with each other for living. Children living in a co-operating environment are more easly for them to survival in the competition society. Personally, I think children not only need the sense of competition but also need to understand the spirite of team working. Both of them are necessary for children to creat them furture.
