错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Sam got up at six'o clock yesterday. And then, he rode his bike to the park, he had great fun at the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. At the afternoon, Sam playd basketball with his classmate from four to six. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father who bought a classic CD. What a interesting day Sam had.