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Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning.Then he went to the park by bike.He played of very happy in the park.At noon,he had lunch in the McDonald's with his parents.At afternoon,he played basketball from four o'clock to six o'clock with his classmates.After dinner,he went for a walk with his father.His father bought a classical music's CD for him.What a fun day Sam had!