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Yestoday, In the morning, Sam got up at six clock and then went to park by bike, he was very happy when he was stay park. In the noon, his parents and he had a lunch at the McDonald's.(In the noon, he had a lunch with his parents.) In the afternoon,he palyed basketball with his classmates from 4pm to 6pm.After dinner, sa