句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Yestoday, In the morning, Sam got up at six clock and then went to park by bike, he was very happy when he was stay park. In the noon, his parents and he had a lunch at the McDonald's.(In the noon, he had a lunch with his parents.) In the afte sa