正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I had a good math teach. His name is Mr. xu. He is tall. He likes to play basketball. Some times, he plays basketball with us. We were playing basketball together. But he was a teacher in charge 0f a class. If somebody did erring, he was angry. He asked all students do much homework.