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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
The photo above shows an American girl dressing up traditional chinese costume and smiling. The girl is happy experiencing a total different costume style from a different culture. Her hair is done with chinese traditional accessories and her face shining with the glittering silver fringe. It is now popular for oversea people coming to China and experiencing chinese culture. They try to find their ways to understand and love chinese culture which is profound with long history. They try on traditional costumes. They visit ancient chinese buildings. They learn Peking Opera. They eat chinese special food. They even study Confucious. Chinese culture is now more and more popular which means China is more open and welcome to the world. At the same time, chinese people are accepting western culture. They learn the advanced ideas and concepts from western people. The cultural exchange helps western and eastern people communicate and develop mutual understanding which enhance economic cooperation and civilization development for each other.