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From:Wang Haiyang Date: Dec 23th, 2008 To:Mr. Johnson Hello Mr. Johnson, We have recieved your goods 3,000 pieces in quantity on December 22nd. But according to our signing of No. 35 order, the quantity should be 3,500. We haven't got the other 500 pieces yet. Please confirm your shipping list and reply as soon as possible. Best regards, Haiyang Wang