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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2872
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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用户练习作文:

From the table given above,we can observe that compared with 2004,in 2005,accidents in a Chinese City have increased. The accidents which drivers turning left without due care caused have increased to 608,nearly 10%. The accidents which drives traveling too close to other vehicles caused have increased to 411,nearly 9%. The accidents which pedestrians crossing roads carelessly caused have increased to 401 ,nearly 12%.The accidents which drivers driving under the influence of alcohol caused have increased to 281,nearly 15%.But the accidents which drivers failing to gives a signal caused have decreased to 264,nearly 5%. The table inform us of the phenomenon that accidents in a chinese city have increased. What exactly contribute this phenomenon?Reasons can be listed follows: for one thing,with the improvement of economic level,more and more people have bought cars.More cars mean that these are more likely to cause accidents. With the increasing of population in city,more people mean more complex traffic environment. We should pay more attention to traffic rules so that we can protect ourselves away from the accident.

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