回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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Dear Wang, July 5th Thank you for inviting me and my family to your son's birthday party at royal hotel on July 10th. I would like to come but I have to go back to my country for business recently. I really appreciate the invitation but I am sorry for not coming. Best wishes, Smith