英语三级B卷作文模拟附范文:拟通知

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Notice There will be a tour to Nanlin Farm in Qinglong County on July 20th, 2010. The itinerary is: 8:30am In the farm office, brief introduction on the farm by general manager. 9:30am seeing the farm 10:30am seeing factory founded by the farm 11:30am dinner hosted by farmers All attendees please convene before the library at 6:30am. The bus will take off at 6:40am in time.