小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

I am a 12-year-old girl and I am a junior student in a famous EMI school. I like to play with my schoolmates in the park after school. One day, my friend Amy asked me curiously, 'What will you do when you grow up?' It waws a fresh question that I never thought about before. 'Hm... let's me think... Ah, I want to be an astronaut.' I answered confidently. 'Why you want to be an astronaut?' asked Amy. 'When I lie on my bed every night, I like to stare at twinkle stars up up in the sky. They are very beautiful and seem smiling at me. If I was an astronaut, I would be able to fly into the universal and play with them. It would be amazing!' 'I hope your dream would come true.' Amy exclaimed.