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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3133
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作文要求:

写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇词汇使用准确,但要避免拼写出错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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With the improvement of computer technology, computers have played a indispensable role in our daliy life. We almost can see a computer in anywhere, such as liberary, supermarket, university. The use of compuer greatly convenient for our life, and it let us don't have to do a lot of repetitive work. Compare with the human brain, the advantages of computers have can be listed follows: for one things, computer have super computing ability, and it can do somethings in a minute which may be spend our several days or monthes. Computers also can work uninterrupted for a long time, and it isn't human brain can stand. Computers have many advantages which human brain haven't, but it doesn't mean that computers are better human brain. Human brain also have some advantage which computers haven't. For example, human brain can do some creative things, such as writing article, painting, designing.And it is computer hard to do. So the main diffirent between computer and human brain is that they are good at diffirent work.

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