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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3133
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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With the improvement of computer technology, computers have played an indispensable role in our daily life. We almost can see a computer in anywhere, such as library, supermarket, university. The use of computer greatly convenient for our life, and it let us don't have to do a lot of repetitive work. Compare with the human brain, computers have many advantage.It can be listed follows: for one thing, computer have super computing ability, and it can do something in a minute which may spend our several days or monthes. Computers can also work uninterrupted for a long time, and it isn't human brain can stand. Computers has many advantages what human brain hasn't, but it doesn't mean that computers are better human brain. Human brain also have some advantage which computers haven't. For example, human brain can do some creative things, such as writing article, painting, designing.And it is computer hard to do. So the main different between computer and human brain is that they are good at different work.

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