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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。
Sam get up at six'o clock yesterday. He rode a bike to go to the park and had fun in the park. In the noon, he ate lunch with his parents in the McDonald's. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates from four to six. After the dinner, sam went for a walk with his father who bought him a classic music CD. What an interesting day Sam had.
