小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

There is a picture. It is a jerry's family of picture. This tall man is jerry's father. He is worker. He works in the country city. Let's look at beautiful women. She has pretty face and light eyes. She is worker too. She likes cooking and doing housework. Finally, look at the little boy. Her name is jerry. He is student. He often goes to school on foot.