单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
Busy day One day start in the morning. At six o'clock, I usually get up and go out run. At seven o'clock, my daughter goes to school by car. At eight o'clock, I go to company by bus. Then at eighteen 0'clock, I go home by bus too. At seventeen o'clock, we have supper. At nineteen o'clock, we go to bed. The busy day is over.