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I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is football. when I was a yong boy, I picked up a football by chance on my way home. Then my friends and I started to play football in our spare time, and I love playing football deeply from then on. I often kick football and enter for competment with my classmate. My favourite football star is Bakham who is an Englishman. My hope is to be a professional footmall player.