小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Today is my holiday. I get up early in this morning and have a breakfast with my wife and my child. Then we are going to zoo. We arrive here at 9 o'clock. At first, we find some birds and moneys. My child plays with them very happy. Then we visit the elephants. The elephants are very huge. They have a long nose and sharp teeth. My child is afraid of them when she had saw them. At last, we visit the snakes and corcodiles. We go back to home at night. I was very happy but I feel very tired.