小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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Today is my holiday. I get up early this morning and have breakfast with my wife and my child. Then we are going to zoo. We arrive here at 9 o'clock. Firstly, we find some birds and monkeys. My child plays with them. Then we visit the elephants. The elephants are very huge. They have a long nose and sharp teeth. My child is afraid of them when she has seen them. Lastly, we find the snakes and crocodiles. We go back to home at night. I was very happy but I feel very tired.