正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;结构良好,但是语言不流畅;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒。
My warm house My house is in the five floors. It is not big. But, it is fit my family to live. There are six rooms in my house. The big room is the living room. There is a TV on the wall. There is a glass table in the middle of living room. There is a sofa behind the table. We often sit here to watch TV. This living room is bright. There're two bedrooms. The big one's is my bedroom. The small one's is my daughter's bed room. There are a bed and a desk in the room. Finally, there are bathroom and kitchen in the house too. Here rang with cheers and laughter.