正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
My favourite teacher I have many teachers from grade school to college. Mr xu is one's of my favourite teachers. He taught us math. We feel fun in his class. He likes speaking history. So, we feel happy and fun. Some time, He was very angry. Because, our exam results were't well.