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Welcome to Artist Art and Craft Products Company! I am HR assistant Cindy Chen. You can call me Cindy. Today is your first day at our company, so you’re probably a litter nervous and curious even a little exciting. I’ve put together all the information you should need to get started below. If you still have questions after you’ve gone through this information please feel free to ask me. Let me tell you about the plan for today. There are four things on your tour here. First, I will introduce you to the sale’s department, where you are going to work in the future. There are five staffs including you, one manger named Johnson. He is nice person. In the future, if you have any problems about the work you can ask him. He will be happy to help. Second, I will show you some other buildings, like where your dormin is. You will see some of the sports facilities, we have a basketball playground, a table tennis room, some fitness equipments, something like that. I think you will surprise how our employees like to play sports. Every day after work, these places will be full of people. Third, this afternoon, there is a welcome party for all of you. The party will take for two hours. We have speeches from our boss, and some other department’s manager. You will get to know more about the colleagues. And finally, there is some time left for you to ask some questions. All right, are there any questions before we begin? Questions: 1. So Cindy, are there any employee continues job specific training? Yes, if you work hard and well, we will have some training courses, and it is for free. 2. Is there going to be a chance to travel some places? Yes, we have twice a year to travel. Okay, Thanks. That’s, no more questions. I think I will enjoy working here.