作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;衔接成分偏少;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用。
A trip We went to Gulangyu land in summer last year. There had many things can't to forgot it Last trip . For example, we went there with our workmate by plane. We from Shanghai to Xiamen airport. But during we came back our plane was late. Because the weathwer was bad . It was thunderbolt and rainy. So we waited the plane to leave spend many hours.