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A trip We went to Gulangyu land in summer last year. There had many things can't to forgot it Last trip . For example, we went there with our workmate by plane. We were from Shanghai to Xiamen airport. But during we came back by our plane was late. Because the weather was bad . It was thunderbolt and rainy. So we waited for the plane to leave spend many hours.