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My daught have a pet. It is a lovely mouse. It lives in a small cage. It has a white hair. It likes to eating foods and playing with himself. We need to clear the cage one week each moth. Sometime my daught forgets to offer food for mouse. So it was hungry. Then it will jumb and jumb.