文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
My daughter have a pet. It is a lovely mouse. It lives in a small cage. It has a white hair. It likes eating foods and playing with himself. We need to clear the cage every week each moth. Sometime my daughter forgets to offer food for mouse. So it was hungry. Then it will jump and jump.