单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
My daughter has a pet. It is a lovely mouse. It lives in a small cage. It has a white hair. It likes eating foods and playing with himself. We need to clear the cage every week. Sometime my daughter forgets to offer food for mouse. So it was hungry. Then it will jump and jump.