单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
My daughter has a pet. It is a lovely mouse. It lives in a small cage. It has a white hair. It likes eating foods and playing with himself. The cage was cleared every week by us. Sometimes my daughter forgets to offer food for mouse. So it was hungry. Then it will jump and jump.