错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
sam got up at six yesterday. then he went to the park by bike, and he had a good time. in the noon, he had lunch at mcdonald's with his parents. he and his classmates palyed basketball in school from four to six in the afternoon. after dinner, he and his father went for a walk, and his father bought a classical CD for him. what's a fuuny day it is!