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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode bike to the park, and he had great time in the park. At noon, he had lunch in mcdonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates from four to six in school. It is relaxing. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father, and his father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he likes music very much. What a funy day Sam had!
