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Sam got up at 6 o'clock。He rode to the park,piayed very happy。He had lunch at McDonalds with his parents。He played basketball with his classmates in the school from 16:00 to 18:00 in the afternoon.He went for a walk with his father after supper.His father bught a classical music CD for him.He had an interesting day.