词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at 6 o'clock。 He rode to the park,played very happy。 He had lunch at McDonalds with his parents。 He played basketball with his classmates in the school from 16:00 to 18:00 in the afternoon. He went for a walk with his father after supper. His father bought a classical music CD for him.He had an interesting day.