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How to improve school safety Since 2010， several campus accident had happended in our country， it shocks everyone。 beside shocking，many people want to find the way to solve this problem, they consider how to improve school saftey, ensure the safety of all the students. In my opinion, fist, school may hire more security guards, and all the students and other people may take actions too, such as when we find same guys may harm studends, we can call the police as soon as possible