邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者在句法层面做的很棒；建议作者增加过程性词汇的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

How to improve school safety Since 2010， several campus incidents had happened in our country， it shocks everyone。 Beside shocking，many people want to find the way to solve this problem, they consider how to improve school saftey, ensure the safety of all the students. In my opinion, fist, school may hire more security guards, and all the students and other people may take actions too, such as when we find some guys may harm studends, we can call the police as soon as possible