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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
过渡词和衔接词不饱和，文章行文较为流畅；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者词汇量积累较好，但高级词汇的积累仍需加强，还要避免有拼写错误。
Our spring outing I am Lihua， from class one grade three of Hongxing middle school. Last week, all my classmats gatherd together, we disscussed to go out for our spring traveling, in the end we disided to climb maintain in amusement park. We started our traveling on sunday, and we climbed the maintain eraly, and we saw the sun was rising up. We had a good time on the maintain top where we had our lunch. Befor we leave the maintain top, we puted all the rubish in the bin, and then we went home. It is a wonder day, I think all of us will remember that day.
