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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2882
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

文中学术词汇表达比较准确,不过词汇总体比较贫乏,有拼写错误;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

The graph describes the consumption of fish, lamb, chicken and beef in a European country between 1979 and 2004. According to the dragram, beef was more popular than other groups in 1979 every week (over 200 grams). The chicken and lamb were eaten at the same level (around 150 grams) while the fish was not popular, which was consumed just over 50 grams. But during the 25 years period, the consumption of beef and lamb declined dramactically to about 100 grams and 50 grams, respectivatilly. At the same time, the figure of fish decreased slightly to just under 50 grams. The consumption of chicken showed an oppition trend that the level increased significantly to 250 grams. Overall, the chicken had become the most popular food with the consumption of other food declined over the 25 year period.

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