邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve the school safety School safety is a matter of great importance. Great efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. School guard should check everyone bfroe they enter school strictly. Besides, School security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some dengrous people can be frightened away. More importantly, school safety education should be offered by the school. Students can be taught what to do when they face with danger. As a member of students, we should keep safety in mind . We shouldn't trust strangers, even give our personal information to them.