小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. I hane a good friend.she is a beautiful giel. she has long hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.her voice is better.shi is good singing. shi is clever girl. she like reading, playing computer games and chess.shi is also nice.she often helps us.ous classmates like very much.