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When I grow up My name is Clever. I work in a big company. I am a product manager. Some kids toy design by me. This product includ stroller and car seat and cot. These products sale to many countries. I fell happy to see that child use the stroller. Many child's mother like to select the fashion and better stroller .So we need to visit the supermarket and gather the information. The work is hard. But we are happy.