文章词汇表达灵活恰当,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
When I grow up My name is Clever. I work in a big company. I am a product manager. Some kids toy design by me. This product include stroller and car seat and cot. The product saled to many countries. I fell happy to see that child uses the stroller. Many child's mother likes to select the fashion and better stroller . So we need to visit the supermarket and gather the information. The work is hard. But we are happy.