高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇不足；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

I love sports. Every summer or winter vocation, I will do all kinds of sports with my friends,such as swim, ride bicycle,climb mountains and play football. But my favorite sport is playing football. How long had I loved this sport? When I was a child,I picked up a football by chance. And I brought it back home,played football with my friends.Since then,I begined to love in this sport. I often trained the skills of football with my classmates and joined competitions with them too. You know,when you are in a sweat in the ball park , you will enjoy the fun of this sport. Enjoying the success of this game with your teammate is the most happiness thing. MY favorite football star is Beckham from England. I hope to become a professinal football player.