小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather's name is Mr.zhang. He is a farmer. He is eighty years old. I couldn't to remember anything about him. Becase my mother have no told me something. He was very kindly and hard-working.But he was ill. Then he was died as soon after. I feel very sad. My mother feel very sad too. Finally I often miss him about kind face.