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初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:04浏览次数:2456
要求:
以“如何保护我们的眼睛 How To Protect Our Eyes ”为主题写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

How To Protect Our Eyes As we all know,our eyes are quite important to us.For example,we use eyes to see,to read.Imagine what will happen if we can't see! Perhaps our life will be more difficult!So we must know how to keep us see clearly.Firstly,we should watch the green things per hour.It helps our eyes to rest. Secondly,don't use too many computers or mobile phones! This is the most helpful step.The people that don't always use computers can usually see more clearly than people that always looks at the computer screens!That's a fact.Finally,we can also eat more healthy vegetables and fruits,such as carrots,tomatoes and cherries.If you are following these steps,I am sure you will see more clearly!dddddddddddddddfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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