高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇积累还有很大进步空间；文中衔接词丰富。

My favorite sport is soccer. In one chance, I picked up a soccer, and take it to school, I play it with my friends, it's very fun! Then I play it every day, I found that I like soccer so much!! After that, soccer became my favorite sport. When I was in the middle school, I joined a soccer team. It is very fun, to play with other people, and to play with other teams. My favorite soccer star is Beckham. Because he varies well to make a good goal. My greatest wish is to become a professional football player, I want to become the next Beckham.