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A bout new year in china we will get a new year soon after. Many people busy in the trip. they are go home by bus or by train or by plane or driver himself. because the relavties need us to attend . we often go home once year. they have many things to talk each other. some interesting things or some laughing things. However many suns and daughters go to home happy. The holiday is seven days.