2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):交流学生

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

A bout new year in china we will get a new year soon after. Many peoples busy in the trip. They go home by bus or by train or by plane or driver himself. Because the relatives need us to attend . We often go home once year. They have many things to talk each other. some interesting things and some laughing storys. However many suns and daughters go home happy. The holiday is a week.